Tuesday, 4 May 2010
Voiceover Evaluation Task- Alex Cox
Friday, 30 April 2010
Final Post of my Thoughts (Post Production)
Due to the time limit that we were working to, and the fact we taking multiple shots of each shot so we could later pick which one was most effective, we were a little rushed to say the least. On top of this with it being a teaser trailer we had to include much more shots than we were used to, as apposed to fewer, more extended shots, as with previous projects. It did at times become challenging to fit this all in and focus on aspects such as lighting and scenery at all times, so i can appreciate and accept the points being raised. We do not feel this slight lack of concentration however damaged our overall production too severly as we are extremely pleased with the quality of the shots we dedicated so much time and effort to, and we feel this reflects our commitment to the teaser trailer.
I have learned a lot about the technology used to create media films and other products and enjoyed how interactive the blog is. I have watched many other groups teaser trailers and made comments on what I think their strengths and weaknesses are and am pleased to see other people take the time to evaluate our own, as this all helps in the long run. I feel my personal level of creativity has progressed since the beginning of the coursework, and am looking forward to expanding on these ideas at higher education.
The university course i have applied for uses media and representations as it is largely based around television, radio, and newspapers. Therefor the skills that I have learned over the last two years are going to be of great importance as I go into university, with the vision of a career in the media industry becoming ever more clearer.
Further Audience Feedback (Post Production)

First of all one of our external actors, Rafid Valenciano uploaded the video onto facebook, a popular social networking website. This came up on Matt Rayburn's page, where friends and fellow students could easily share their comments and opinions.

The Marketing Campaign (Post Production)
The teaser trailer gives the audience indicators of the narrative and characters as a build up but never really gives away an end result. This would spark interest from the audience who would want to research into the film to find out a more detailed account of what it's about.
The three main characters introduced here also appear on the magazine front cover and poster. The poster is very discreet but holds a firm ground in how it reflects the attitude and sincerity of the trailer. The name and slogan of the film are established most effectively through this as they are the only pieces of text that appear on the poster.
Meanwhile the magazine front cover shows it as an exciting upcoming cinematic event of great importance, just through the fact it dominates a highly respected magazine's front page. The way the cameraman/director is included in the shot as well as the actors, and also Rafid Valenciano's thoughtful pose suggests a more behind the scenes look at the film. The exclusive interviews that are adveritsed adds a very personal touch between viewer and actor as they can find out more about the opinions and inspirations behind the characters and narrative through this.
The way in which we linked these three pieces was by no means a coincedence. Each one gives away something slightly different about the film despite all selling the same product. Similarities can particularly be drawn between the poster and magazine front cover which correspond each other well in two ways. We purposely chose the same grafitti backdrop for the images as this not only sets up the film as very urban, but can also be easily recognised by the audience who would instantly think of 'West 10 Reloaded' whenever they saw either of the pieces. This location is also included in the trailer itself which would remind them of the poster/ magazine and vice versa, keeping it in their minds. The way in which the same 3 characters feature in all 3 is another example of this, and this would mean they would quickly become familiar faces in the world of cinema. Therefor we feel the campaign works well as each product compliments the other whilst offering something different; thus generating maximum interest and imposing itself upon a variety of audiences.
Overall Evaluation
There are elements we would improve aswell such as the quality of our editing and the use of greater effects on the teaser poster. However we ran out of time to imrove these and therefore there is still room for improvement but on a whole i believe our campaign to have been a successful one.
Evaluation of costume props and mise en scene
In terms of props we tried to limit this to the very minimum you would expect a youth in todays society to possess such as a mobil again to add to the reality. We did use a knife to provoke the thought of violence in the audiences mind and this then lead us to simulated aggression later in the trailer. We felt it important not to advertise actually using the knife as this is a very tender issue in Britain currently.
In terms of the chosen scenery we tried to ensure that each shot had a different location to create a sense of large scale drama that we desired. We have since been told that this is exactly what the trailer put across and that maybe we should alter the type of scene we base some of our shots in. To improve, this is what we would do.
Every Product In Our Campaign
Each and every part of the campaign has been planned carefully to produce a domino effect that ultimatly leads to anyone who has viewed all three products beeing drawn into watching the film when it is released. We believed this to be quite a unique technique and havent seen any other group produce the same effect in the audience feedback tasks we have participated in.
Evaluation Task


This shot was taken a the first of a three shot sequence. We felt a mid shot was appropriate to give a general view of the scene aswell as the character. This was an unusual technique to use in a teaser trailer but we felt the sequence was approriate to give the audience an insight to the narrative. The fact that the alleyway is quite narrow also means that the shot looks almost surreal at points contributing to the idea of helpness which was the intended message in this shot and sequence.
This shot was an interesting one. It took a number of attempts to get right but we felt it was quite original. The content of the shot is a full 360 degrees around the two subjects and gives the intention of violence an extra edge that makes it particularly effective. The shot idea was originally gained from the film adulthood but we adapted it to fit our own purposes for the trailer.
This shot is possibly one of the more aggressive and threatening of the trailer. It uses the simple camera movements of a sideways pan to follow the action on screen. We used low lighting to raise connotations of a darker scene and the action on screen suggests this.
This shot is a low angled shot and again was part of a three shot sequence. We later added a voice over for the dialog as we considered this to be a good use of time. It vastly improved the quality of the general sound and ensured that any interference was illiminated. we held the shot a little longer than we did for others as it is a pivotal moment in the films narrative. It is also a very heavily lit shot so every elment of the cosyume had to correct.
This was a particularly hard shot to get right. As its an extreme low angle it was impossible for the person operating the camera to see the shot. Therefore it was down to guesswork how to do the shot. eventually we got it right however and we feel the end product was worth it. We didn't use a voice over in this shot as the subject was so close to the microphone we didnt feel it neccessary. The light from behind also gives a silouette effect which contributes to the mood created.
This is second shot of a two shot sequence and is the last longer shot og the trailer. It is held for 3 seconds and we decided on a mid shot as it helps include everything we wanted in the shot. We also used a small pan movement to follow one of the subjects out of the scene towards the end of the scene.
This is everyones favourite shot of the production. It is possibly the shortest shot but involves the subject punching the screen of the camera and the relaease date appearing as a result. we borrowed the idea from the teaser trailer for 'Shank' and we personally feel we easily matched the quality. The camera is in a low angle position and we did this to get the sky in the background as back lighting. This effect is possibly the most fitting for any shot in the entire production.
This shot is a long shot of one of the characters. It is used as a mood shot at the very beggining to set the genre of the production aswell as give a hint to the general content. This is before the soundtrack drops and is used as an oppertunity to build a mood in the trailer. We believe this worked effectively and created the mood intended.
By Alex, Matt H, Matt R.
Thursday, 29 April 2010
Thursday, 22 April 2010
Tuesday, 20 April 2010
Editing Analysis
We tried to ensure that we created a montage effect that leave the audience in confusion as to what they had just seen. This would then lead to a mass nterest in the films narrative and genre producing a much higher profile for the film and its market.
The transitions used are generally the same ranging between fade to black and a simple cut to ensure the trailer is not to complicated in its approach. We also edited the light balance in many of the shots to create different effects to our own purposes such as creating darker scenes to procure deeper emotion.
Mixing the sound with the trailer was a difficult task as during priods of dialog we had to fade it in and out perfectly so as to keep each file audable. This meant literally having to mix the two together andraising the volume of each where appropriate.
If we had more time we would improve the order in whic we placed our shots. we found later that there were better ordrs in which the shots fitted but due to lack of time were unalble to do so.
Analysis of Camera shots, angles and transitions.
As we failed in our ancillary task to include a 360 degree angle shot we wanted to include it in this production. It took many attempts to get the overall speed, height and width of the shot perfect but in the end alongside the transition e have used the shot is very impressive. We did also alter the speed of the shot later in the editing suite to produce a more flowing effect.
We also tried to ensure that all of our shots lasted no longer than five seconds as the idea ofour trailer was to create a fast flowing montage of shots that leave alot of unanswered questions about the film itself. The use of the cut and fade to black shot transitions assisted in this desired effect as the rapid change of scene produces a rapid change of emmotion.
The final shot of the trailer is possibly the most impressive. The idea was actually borrowed from the trailer of the recently released 'Shank'. The idea is to give the genre and the release date of the film away all in one shot. we believe wecreated this effect perfectly and actually managed to make look as if it was professionally done.
As far as what we would improve goes we feel that there are certain shots that could have be improved through a different use of angles. The connotations raised by some of the shots are those we intended to create and therefore it affects the purpose of the trailer and narrative. Although this is not a major problem it still leaves much out of place within the trailer and should we get the oppertunity we would certainly make ammendments.
Sunday, 18 April 2010
Production Evaluations (post production)
We spent a long time creatin a film poster which would stand out in a crowd and leave a lasting image in the head of passers by. To do this we had to make it bold, colourful, and eye catching. We used photoshop to add layers; distorting the edges of the of the image and outlines, and increasing the saturation and contrast of the colours. The image we used lets the audience knows what the charcters are about, with Alex the main character frowning at the front with his arms folded. The other two characters are situated either side of him in an agressive stance. This creates a very serious mood which is reinforced by the bold lettering and font of the title of the film. 'West 10 Reloaded' is slapped straight across the middle of the poster and is very upfront.
'Britain's most dangerous postcode' the main quote of the film is located above it at the top of the page in smaller slanted typeface to leave the importance with the title. Film company logos are also included at the bottom of the page as we felt this would improve the realism of the poster, and works in further advertising the film. The basic, simplistic approach works well as it does not give too much away and delivers the main points across- the name and the characters of the film.
Magazine Front Cover
This was relatively difficult to produce as we knew we had to include many different things. As well as aqdvertising the film we had to also involve the use of promotions, competitions, etc to persuade people to buy the maagzine. The magazine front cover uses a much less agressive photo and also includes me, the cameraman, to let the audience know that this takes a far more technical approach to the film. Behind the scenes coverage and actor interviews are also put across boldly and at angles to interest the reader.
As with the magazine front covers i have analysed the bar code, issue number and price were all included in smaller font and without colour to keep the interest with the film being advertised. Heavy use of punctuation, alliteration and other literate techniques are used with the text to to attract an educated audience.
Audience Feedback (post production)
The older audience seemed as little more suprised by what they saw whilst younger viewers made close comparisms to similar film such as 'Kidulthood'. However both males and females seemed equally interested by the film despite it being far more male orientated. The most praise came for the final 20 seconds of footage due to the build up and then sudden drop of the pace and action of the trailer.
Having taken the comments on board I appreciate that these form of crime dramas are often seen as formulaic and need something to mix them up. However we felt that postcode wars and conflict between rival gangs is a contempory issue which is becoming more controversial by the day. It is often highlighted in the press and I think to adress the situation full on and not glorify the culprits by creating a bad representation of their criminal lifestyle makes for a very interesting film.
Improvements that could have been made to Teaser Trailer (post production)
Much of our teaser trailer is shot in the same place on an overcast day outside. I think more variation here would have worked in making it more interesting, maybe using a variance of night and day shots.
Also we were limited with the amount of actors we could use. I think casting more characters would have been a good idea, maybe including more females as this could have worked in attracting a wider audience. From here different elements of the genre could have been implied meaning our trailer would not just rely on the violent aspects.
We were also unaware of the props that could be used during the film. Therefor only one knife was included throughout. We would have used more weapons as props (not to actually be used but to give an implied usage) to increase the intensity of the teaser trailer.
Overall Teaser Trailer Evaluation (post production)
The voiceover works very well with the opening credits though we feel we should have included some background music at this point. The slogan of the film is included early on and a sketchy release date is revealed as 'this summer'. Only at the end is the name of the film given away and profile shots of the characters are used to raise awareness. In the short term this technique generates audience interest and in the long term including big names in this way helps to sell the film. We used other voiceovers to increase the clarity of the dialouge over the soundtrack which improved the overall quality of the sound. Important phrases of the film were used and we feel the track we used suits the nature of our film perfectly. We were also very pleased with how it fitted the slow introduction to the trailer and drops in time with the 360 rotational shot: the one we feel was most effective.
During the trailer we tried to include as much of the location, which was carefully planned out, as possible. The council estate setting was established early on and I liked how we made good use of grafitti and alley ways to increase the versamilitude of our genre. Another aspect of mise-en-scene we felt we conveyed well to the audience was character clothing. It changed throughout the teaser trailer to show that time had elapsed from one shot to the next. However it was always kept very urban and I think helped us in making Rafid appear as a shady, mysterious and very much intimidating character. This was done mainly through him wearing the bandana over he face which gave the impression that he had something to hide.
The editing process took a while to get right but we feel that in the end we carried it off quite well. We decided not to use complex shot transitions as this made it look unprofessional, so instead stuck to the fade to black/white that are so commonly used in modern day teaser trailers. We also found one quite different shot transition which had a quick flash effect that helped speed up the pace of the shots. By using it several times throughout the trailer we felt we made it our own as we had not seen done many times before. Some shots were sped up and some slowed down depending on the mood we were tryin to create at that particular point.
Overall I think that whilst improvements could definately have been made, we mangaed to produce a professional looking teaser trailer which intrigues the audience whilst keeping them guessing at the same time. Through our use of soundtrack, setting, costume and narrative we believe we have attracted the target audience we were aiming for.
Software and Equipment used for our coursework (post production)
The programmes I have used are Youtube.com, Abobe Premiere 7, Adobe Photoshop 9, Internet Blogger, Microsoft Word, Facebook.com. There has been a noticeable progression in editing from the old ULEAD sotware we used last year. The internet websites I can use freely and easily and helped me to analyse clips and upload videos.
The equipment I have used included Tripod, Mini DV Camera, Tape, Microphone. I have enjoyed using some of the new technology and now feel more confident in using it for future projects.
Shot Evaluation of Teaser Trailer (post production)
For example a close up of the knife that Alex picks up in the phone booth is used to show it's importance in the narrative. How it is used is not yet clear so this shot was also very ambiguous for the audience. Over the shoulder 180 degree rule was kept during shots which included dialogue so as not to disorientate the audience. The scene in the alley-way uses continuity editing to show both characters points of views and reactions to the situation. Though this shot is extended we feel it keeps the flow of the scene moving at a good pace.
We have borrowed two shots from other films of the same genre, whilst manipulating them to suit our own film. The 360 rotation shot from 'Adulthood' is used again at a dramatic point in our film, though we have personalised it by making it low angle and slowing it down to create the effect we were trying to achieve with this. Low angle is prodominently used throughout the teaser trailer to emphasize Alex as the more powerful character holding the most authority. The opposite - high angle - is therefor used regularly for Matt's character (e.g. during the scene in the basketball court) to make him look like the more vulnerable one.
The final shot in which Alex punches the screen ends the trailer in a very aggresive manner, which we feel really works well in putting the point of the film across to the audience. It is taken from 'Shank' though we have zoomed in slightly to make the shot faster and more of a shock to the audience who would not expect it.
By incorporating these two iconic shots into our trailer we are raising the profile of our own film as people will recognize these shots. However by making simple changes to them we have created something new which I feel adds to the originality of our trailer.
Friday, 16 April 2010
Analysis of Empire Magazine Front Cover (post production)

Empire is a well recognized film magazine on a global scale. Therefor it can often afford to put the main image over the top of the magazine name as it is such a well known brand, which not many magazine companies can get away with. This also results in greater advertising of the film the image is representing, which in this case is the new release of 'Clash of the Titans', as it appears to be pushed out of the page and into the reader's focus.
Whilst the striking photo somewhat steals the show, there is still a lot to be seen on the front cover. At the top of the page there is an advertisement for free posters, which is published in bold and even highlighted as this will obviously encourage the reader to buy the magazine. Other similar techniques include the captions 'exclusive interviews' and '30 years of alien' (the 'alien' section will appeal to that particular fan base) which are used by the publisher to entice the audience to read on as they prove to be the main selling points of the magazine. Superlative adjectives such as 'first' and 'hottest' really work in making this magazine sound top of the range despite it having close competitors.
The magazine front cover works in hand with the film being advertised as the font of 'Empire' has been edited to suit the style of the film with a fiery effect. This emphasizes the film as one of great influence and importance to not only the brand but the film fanatics out there as well. The title of the film appears next to the image which clearly dominates the front cover, not only with its size but also the position of the character, the way in which he holds his sword, and the extent to which the light shines on his face. This effect would obviously please the film producers and direcors as lighting, props, costume and setting are all exposed in this one image.
Smaller details such as the barcode, price and date of the magazine are all included and are vital in making the magazine look proffesional. We shall certainly use this technique in our own work to increase the realism established by the front cover.Overall this magazine front cover looks busy with information but crucially evades looking messy which could well be the key to it's success. The use of one main image and two much smaller ones gives a clear idea on the magazine's main focus, and the well arranged text gives the audience a peek into the content of the magazine. Little is given away on the narrative of 'Clash of the Titans' though it is still made to look and sound like an epic film.



